Thursday, May 17, 2007

Uneven tone and bad writing

I was skimming through Ep. III yesterday. The tone is all over the place. Is it light-hearted? Serious? Is the following an inadvertant pun or a joke put in a bad place?

Annakin has just killed Count Dooku after cutting off both of his hands. Obi Wan scolds him.

Annakin: Yes but he was an unarmed prisoner.... I shouldn't have done that, it's not the Jedi way.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

i still think it was the best one, except maybe for the first one.
-david