RESHOOT
>Shrine interior with wide angle
>Last scene
EDITING CHANGES
>Slow down slow motion star bounce.
>Make slow zoom to broken spinner upon first appearance longer.
>Make flashbacks longer.
>redit final sequence ala Dan's transition
>Make credits bigger
>Make zoom out from star on desert ground longer.
>Make it clearer that Ben's looking at a video screen in red room
>Longer dissolve to cloud. Make that section feel like "morphing weirdness."
THINGS TO WRITE
>Write ending codex narration
AUDIO TO RECORD
>Sounds needed: tape recorder, typing
>Ben's narration
FOR MASTER/ONLINE
>Delete desert tower
>fix lens spot
>Correct the early scenes dirty
>fix blinks
>fx shot-delete paper from Ben's hand on stairs
>insert garbage removal shot
>insert truck shot
>Make clouds glitchy
>fix burning house scene
>desert map CU
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