>Record VO for end segment and possibly segue into VO which then turns into noise. Possibly cut out from end typing earlier to create clearer connection from typing to flyer.
>Take out, "crow, a symbol of death," but he liked the other text about being called and haunted.
>Delete "over-unity effects" VO.
>Intro needs some kind of VO to set up later VO. Could be Ben mumbling, like "input .01 volts..." etc. etc.
>Slow down slow motion star bounce.
>Make slow zoom to spinner upon first appearance longer.
>Longer dissolve to cloud. Make that section feel like "morphing weirdness."
>Make desert VO more directed since Ben seems to be charging ahead
>Make flashbacks longer.
>Sounds needed: tape recorder, typing
>Make clouds glitchy?
>Make zoom out from star on desert ground longer.
>He liked all the "conjecture/question" text.
>Supported idea of adding the new VO to make ending clearer in terms of backstory.
>Change codex VO line to something like "obscured by physics."
>At end also suggested many more flyers "filling up the windows."
>Restore overlapping audio for microfiche scene.
>Felt overall structure makes sense. Noted that each segment (stars/mystery/bad thing) gets longer and longer which is appropriate.
>He liked the reaction to the dead bird since Ben didn't totally freak out, but treated the bird as an odd, awesome but not totally horrific event. As director, I took credit for this.
BTW, Dan said he's starting on the scoring/sound design next week.
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