Well after lots of tries, I'm thinking of going another way with the bird scene. It's just too hard to make it work. Here's a new version. Let me know what you think.
So Ben is at the desert shrine. He looks in at the shrine. "Ex Nihilo." Then he reaches in to touch the evil eye and then *ouch*. He cuts his hand on the eye. And he looks at his hand and there's a dab of red blood. Now he's driving in his car. He's looking up "ex nihilo" on his mini-computer. Scary images. More scary images. And Ben notices his hand again. And it's still bleeding. Only this time the blood is bluish black. And we see Ben's car driving off into dark, brooding clouds.
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